On powd'ry grains of sand
At genial island's narrow end,
Morning gently breaks:

I cast stones at crested waves;
Cheeks still moist in briny breeze.

Poetry by arquious The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2015-01-28 at 03:38

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Your imagery is so beautiful and delicate. Lovely!

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As rhythmic and soothing as the natural scene it describes. It's much harder, I think, to establish rhythm in a poem over rhyme. Nicely done.

Phyllis J. Rhodes
So succinctly painted. Ahh, the beauty.