I don't know if anyone will realise but as I wrote the poem.. I calmed down alot. I feel better now.


Sorry for being your friend

Some things aren't as clear as black and white
Sometimes it's hard choosing to befriend or to fight
So what's the purpose of this writing tonight?
Just something that I want to bring to light
You judged me before you knew who I was
My history, my thoughts, my good points, my flaws
And now when I ask: "You hate me because..?"
Your blindness persists, stuck in false laws
So why attack me? What did I do?
Was it because I saw you for you?
Despite my justification though I just can't give up
I can't look away Like I don't give a fuck
I see a light in you, dim but there
I can see past your vicious glare
I can feel that beyond it there hides
A child like myself, emotionally scarred
And as I gaze out at tonight's shifting tides
I don't care how long it takes or how hard
It may be
I will not give up




Poetry by Hasani
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Written on 2006-04-27 at 00:49

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Kel
jed you rele have to admire those ppl who can rhyme every sentence :| lol hey what's up hasani ? hehe manda showed me this site :) its pretty kool ... ANYWAY .. lol yea your poem is rele good :D and it definitely has a lot of emotions cropping up ... you have rele great expression with your words :) yay .. lol ttyl_
2006-05-07


Onyeka Nwelue
I would love to read all the poems that you have written and would also want to know more of what lies beneath the crypt.

Nicely written and constructed.
2006-04-27


Amanda Manmohan
Ahh yes Hasani...another absolutely perfect poem from you! I love it. I can definitely tell how angry you were at the beginning and that, towards the end, you realised the faults of the person to whom you are speaking, and it is really sweet that despite those faults, you won't give up on them. You are such a good friend :) Well done!
2006-04-27