Between Dreams

There is a moment
Prior to sleep
Upon the edge
Of slumbers deep

When all defenses slip away

And at that moment
Should you say

I love you.....

I might believe



Poetry by Yanto
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Written on 2015-10-13 at 22:27

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Perhaps that moment is the most pure of all. very nice :)
2015-10-19



Youu have made the moment magical from now on. True beauty.
Ashe
2015-10-15


countryfog
This seems to me perfect . . . of all the moments in a day it is as you say, just before falling asleep when we are most honest, and most vulnerable, just as your last line suggests.
2015-10-15