a cowrite by Aliena and lastromantichero in response to Zoya Zaidis challenge and it was a wonderful pleassure to cowrite with this wonderful poet and friend


Nordic Sunset by Aliena and Lastromantichero

Ablaze in the west
Candescent skies become me
As night time recall
Brings sorrowful horizons
Dark shadows below the fire

Deserted skies bear
A rosy imprint of love
Slowly vanishing,
Pines and herbs are exhaling
A scented sigh of goodbye

But as I in awe
Stand before the beauty fire
I find my own peace
In knowing a desired love
Secretly held but so true

It is midnight hour
The lake has slowed down its breath
falling into sleep.
On the northern horizon,
I perceive the new daylight.




Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-05-04 at 19:57

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Cuddly Fox
In my hole in the ground
no sleep to be found
cos that she wolf you know
is prowling around
if i get chance of sleep
i surely will grab it
but for now i am trying
to like this rabbit

a brilliant poem the pair of you well done
2006-05-05


Jon Hanover
Powerful. Cannot tell who entered what line where, or how it is divided in contribution. Which tells me it is genuinely one of the best poems ever. It is as if you are both in harmony and writing with one hand and two brilliant minds. Awesome.
2006-05-05


Kathy Lockhart
such a beautiful poem. the imagery is magnificent. Bravo to you both. kathy
2006-05-04


Malin Johansson
Good team work here... thumbs up...
2006-05-04