A respectful attempt to express deep feelings in my heart in the manner and style of Rupert Brooke's love poems


Just How My Heart Became You by M.A.Meddings

Just How My Heart Became You

By M.A.Meddings


I saw in the fire of the Western skies
No deeper love than this
And I recall beyond it all
The memory of your kiss
But now I go to another place
Where my love cannot harm you
And remember love for all my days
Just how my heart became you




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Written on 2006-05-05 at 08:09

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pia
" how my heart became you" What a lovely lovely line ....Another sad but very beautiful poem from you-Pia
2006-05-06



As the Italian poet Guinizelli wrote about 700 years ago, "a cor gentil ripara sempre amore". Love finds always refuge in a gentle heart.
Your heart, hero, is most gentle!
2006-05-05


Kathy Lockhart
Gallantry, sacrifice, and love are all here in this heartbreaking poem. Again and again you writing touches this readers heart. Kathy
2006-05-05


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
Well i haven't read any of Rupert Brooke's love poems but if they are as good as this, then i had better take a look.
2006-05-05


Malin Johansson
A very sad but truefull poem, full of love and respect...
I love the stanza:
Just how my heart became you...
2006-05-05


penfold18
Beautifully written, you have done him justice.
2006-05-05