Broken days are the best--heartbreaking and delightful.
2016-01-09

Nice one. I love the line lush and liquid minutes.
2016-01-06

night soul woman
"When night again awakens
Into day."

It is like someone undressed the night
and then said: get dressed:D

that is just one interpretation of course:)

A very romantic poem regardless what will happen afterwards
2016-01-03

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2016-01-02

in a way, your little poem conveys an imagery i have seen in french poems too. nice write Rob and happy new year 2016
2015-12-31

Nancy Sikora
Beautiful and almost haiku-like.
2015-12-30

Lawrence Beck
Well done, Rob. This is a fine, minimalist, maybe I should say, pithy, poem.
2015-12-30

one trick pony
so very personal to be written in third person. i sense a step taken back to gain a writer's perspective.

a great deal said in few words.
2015-12-29