For plain and solid reasons,
Their moments together are
Precious few:

Lush and liquid minutes
When night again awakens
Into day.

Poetry by Rob Graber
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Written on 2015-12-29 at 20:53

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Broken days are the best--heartbreaking and delightful.

Nice one. I love the line lush and liquid minutes.

night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
"When night again awakens
Into day."

It is like someone undressed the night
and then said: get dressed:D

that is just one interpretation of course:)

A very romantic poem regardless what will happen afterwards

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in a way, your little poem conveys an imagery i have seen in french poems too. nice write Rob and happy new year 2016

Nancy Sikora
Beautiful and almost haiku-like.

Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Well done, Rob. This is a fine, minimalist, maybe I should say, pithy, poem.

one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
so very personal to be written in third person. i sense a step taken back to gain a writer's perspective.

a great deal said in few words.