| When the Mist Rises
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2010-02-23
Very well presented graphically, I love how every verb gets its own line. Also love how you have used "greens" as a verb and "freeze" as a noun. Sweet.
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| Adulation
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2010-02-09
Wow, this made me smile. I especially love your words "everypoem, everyword, everymove". But the whole poem is great, in rhythm and wording and form.
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| The Haunted Wood
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2010-02-03
You, sir, are an amazing poet. I adore it when writers in these modern times use the beautiful meters, metaphors, wordings, words, of old. I tip my metaphorical hat and kiss your ring.
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| Pastel Moons
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2010-02-03
That's a wow. The first verse moved me a lot.
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| The magician, the liar II
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2010-02-03
Oh, all of it. But the last line sums it up, and I must have known it when I wrote this. That's why I murmur about Cassandra up top.
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| For Elizabeth
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2010-02-02
Beautiful. And very good work with the rhythm and rhyme.
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