| Lonely Socks
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2006-08-19
Oh i loved. :D Though there was one just one little line that i thought was a bit odd. the one with bold. XD didn't really fit in maybe?
Anyway, the rest of it was just perfect. The rhymes were perfectly placed; I got the feeling that the whole text was flowing. :)
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| 0.7
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2006-01-26
I think I get the 2/3 last ones, but I must say... Maybe I shouldn't try and find a meaning, maybe I should just... appreciate it. Hmm. But I really want it to be about documentaries, and I really want it to criticise them but that's mostly because I've had this discussion- ok, that's just so unimportant.
Good! Very good! Bravo! Da capo! (I've never udnerstood picasso either)
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| Caress my carcass
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2005-12-09
It could make such a good song. :) caress my carcass, just a wonderful play with the words there. A little too much love, to little action for my taste though, but I must say it's one of the better ones!
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| Only a Stranger...
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2005-08-18
I liked it, though you repeated yourself few times. One thing just disturbed me, the three full stops/points whatever. They just started to bother me, off course they are good to use once or twice when you want to create more harmony but... naa... I dunno, just irritated me a bit. :) really good text though: "lend me a sincere smile,
a murmur, a look," - so much feeling in the words.
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| Poet bay com
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2005-08-15
I feel so bad. XD I'm totaly lost and didn't get a thing. ;) *excuses*
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| Declining
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2005-08-15
Just too much good in this text!!
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| Stack me
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2005-08-15
More than ever - I'm a slave for your poems. It's just so easy to read, but still hard to absorb. But off course, everything in english is hard to absorb for me.. but it's understandable when I've just read it for 3 years. I don't complain, it's such a feeling to be surrounded by all these words that aren't really clear for me.
"Rendering my face out of lust as the stasis rusts" - how do you get it? it just seems so easy for you to find tact and harmony in your poems. 'sighing* Well, keep up the good work. ;)
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| .untitled.
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2005-06-14
Such powerfull words, underbart starkt rakt in i själen.
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| Fizzing Fear
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2005-06-13
Horrible, fascinating. You can feel the chaos. You really put me in that very room...
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| Rooster Porn
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2005-06-13
Gooooffling. :p *lol* And here I am watching like some perverted stalker, what a line, what a line. ;)
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| A Last Farewell
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2005-06-12
So beautiful, but i think you lost so much by saying a leather jacket. I know that it's the right word, but it really takes you to reality. More thinking of the sities than our beloved world of Tolkien.
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| Smelling rats
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2005-06-12
I'm getting obsessed. You write just the way I wished I could. With all these tiny little things, funny, making people laugh, wellmade rimes and most important: even if you have to search for it, there's something to understand. A message. I can't get it to be like that, even in swedish I would never be able to do this. And you make it in English. Very impressive indeed, shame on you to make me feel so nermejad. ;)
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| Spanish Castles
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2005-06-12
I love. It really, really, somehow went straight to my heart. Ironiskt-komisk till den grad att man känner sig satt inför undergången. Och så, så, cool. Yeah, that's the word, it's cool
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