Stack me

Stack me, stack those hard earned days
Smack me, help me cope with hardened ways
Bring your favourite dress and some order
Plant them in me so that I eventually
Can drown in you
Pave my face with amazing ease
I'm a slave to the race rats with a stasis greased
Clever bending, talking about the spiders and their neverending attempts to hide us

After a few stabs at freeing myself, my mere bleeding tells
That I'm not ready yet
And that I probably would be if I only understood me
If you just stacked me
If you just smacked me
Out, blacked me out
And showed me what your scent's about
Rendering my face out of lust as the stasis rusts
And the vampire empire of spiders fails yet again
Fails cause it must and it's lifeblood is spent






Poetry by lou bergs
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Written on 2005-08-11 at 23:57

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Angie-M
More than ever - I'm a slave for your poems. It's just so easy to read, but still hard to absorb. But off course, everything in english is hard to absorb for me.. but it's understandable when I've just read it for 3 years. I don't complain, it's such a feeling to be surrounded by all these words that aren't really clear for me.

"Rendering my face out of lust as the stasis rusts" - how do you get it? it just seems so easy for you to find tact and harmony in your poems. 'sighing* Well, keep up the good work. ;)
2005-08-15


Commentally Ill
stacks you
smacks you

well, you said to!
2005-08-15



I liked how the movement of the poem was almost jagged and forceful - it's almost yelling and pulsing as I read the poem.
Good one man!
2005-08-12