Dedicated to swedish politicians in general and swedish right wing politicians in particular :).


Smelling rats

Bootclad kicks and black backhitting sticks.
Us moles won't fall for your cropcircle tricks
Cause we're from the land where UFO's
are born from concrete and bricks.

You went for the poor
and now you're after the poorer
Rip apart Mona Lisa
While making speeches to your fat little kids
about how much you adore her.

But see while you were stitching together
your latest fake statements
I was in the building adjacent
Smelling the rats in your basement.
The pawns may ride on a rusty stud
But I'll stay on point and paint the skies
red with underdog blood












Poetry by lou bergs
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Written on 2005-06-04 at 19:04

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chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
politicians are the same everywhere, greedy bastards, bloated on power.
2005-07-16


LurieJune
Well myself not being Swedish, i'm sure I don't get this completely but I did enjoy it all just the same!!!!
2005-07-09


Angie-M
I'm getting obsessed. You write just the way I wished I could. With all these tiny little things, funny, making people laugh, wellmade rimes and most important: even if you have to search for it, there's something to understand. A message. I can't get it to be like that, even in swedish I would never be able to do this. And you make it in English. Very impressive indeed, shame on you to make me feel so nermejad. ;)
2005-06-12


Ulysses
This has all the hallmarks of Rap, and that's not a bad thing.

For the past 20 years Poetry and Rap have been budding cousins, and its only of late that people [those in the Rap scene] have begun to really appreciate poetry. Respect!

This I like: crop circle tricks - - excellent choice of words.

This also: stitching together your latest fake statements - - The reader can even hear the anger in your voice.

In all I enjoyed the read. Write on~
2005-06-07