| Note to you
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2005-10-17
hey B, when your not happy, i'm not happy...on the other hand, good write
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| Slip Away
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2005-10-12
youth is beautiful when processed like this...very passionate
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| Mimic World
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2005-10-12
we are only what we are
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| Ego Tripping
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2005-10-12
I like the roll of the dice here, it's all laid out right on the sidewalk, for everyone to see
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| Dear Andy
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2005-10-12
Tribute very well accepted...
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| Rebirth
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2005-10-12
everytime i rebirth it turns out alot like the first one...violent with me kicking and screaming
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| The Contrary
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2005-10-12
silience is sometimes someone's only hope for virtue
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| Nature's Prospect
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2005-10-12
Excellente in the portrait of man's ultimate destruction, for only our aft fathers will suffer our dimise
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| Running, swimming or jumping?
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2005-10-12
On a poetic side i like the flow of topics, on the literature side, i could see more thought into the words, to pull the full meaning out and yet still deliver being blunt.
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| Love
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2005-10-12
an enfactuation (spell) is not always love, could be a hole the incompletes the whole
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| Life's a bitch...but I'm worse
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2005-10-12
I felt this way for a while. Maybe not to the extent but effects on people are different, anyway, i coped with hurting myself through physical endurance....
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| Death, or something like it...
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2005-10-12
Words are sometimes hard to find
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| Questions
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2005-10-12
You have to be dirty to become clean, or else you wouldn't know what either feels like
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| The gift of life
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2005-10-12
A self realization that we are expected to give and recieve like everyone else?
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| Changes
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2005-10-12
Lost in confustion, you never know what the cards will deal to you, or what was dealt to the others who share your table. *I don't know why this had to be related to poker* I enjoyed.
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| You made it yourself
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2005-10-11
And some love to hate
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| They locked me up
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2005-10-11
Sad and painfully true
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| The little town, their path to heaven
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2005-10-11
My favorite lines
Of a bad musician
A really bad one-jazz
It sets a flat mood for me, and plays well the images that come to my head.
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| About life 119 The truth about politics
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2005-10-11
bold
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| Guitare
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2005-10-11
a woman's touch in a women's language, this is indeed awe inspiring, the images of magnificent beauty but nothing inparticular
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| Seep
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2005-10-11
As I read your work, your flow of words are beautiful, simply put. I'm encouraged to read on and on, and for ever on
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| it's missing
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2005-10-11
held it so high, it floated away....i could fall in love with that though...
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| Terminal Interface
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2005-10-11
The prize for spreading good wholesome kindness, less appreciated these days, this is a lovely testiment to it....
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| Food For Thought
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2005-10-11
I would've liked to see the paper you wrote this on...if that be the case
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| Astral Travel
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2005-10-11
I like the pretty words. Into consideration that i do not know how or what you are feeling at the time of the piece, I like to see line breaks, almost like a roadmap of how you want the poem to be read. If it is prose, then it it is prose, but poems are beautiful because they are written in spoken language..to me....i do enjoy the read
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| Photoalbum
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2005-10-09
And the pictures come to mind
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| Explore
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2005-10-09
Wow, a true desire and response. Beautiful
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| Dreams won't come true
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2005-06-28
It's sad and beautiful. Speaks softly, I like your poem.
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| Snobbery Aggrevation
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2005-06-18
nice flow, nice flow
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| Free
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2005-06-18
so true so true selflessness is a virtue
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| On repeat
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2005-06-17
This is one of those readings that brings me back to what i call "outside of myself", where i begin to look at things as if i was viewing from a window just above my existence...i like this
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| a new shade of blue
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2005-06-15
i like this poem, i read alot of wisdom in it's words
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| Spanish Castles
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2005-06-12
I enjoy the curise that the words take you on as you read. It flows internally in my head, I am left thinking of some of the old days...Oh those old days
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| While You Slept
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2005-06-12
I'm the type to find humor in everything, even at the wrong moments, but I enjoy the chuckle I got when I read this. It reminded me of watching a "chic-flic", Relaxed in it's simplisity, yet enchanted in it's message.
-AZ
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