| the reason we don't wake up
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2006-10-27
Absolutely beautiful.
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| Slave to Narcotics
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2006-10-14
I strongly disagree with Troll here.
You pin- pointed it. But luckily, there's always room for surprises.
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| Nothing can compare to you
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2006-10-07
Well, that how it goes for the most of us. My condolences.
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| Marie-Jo et ses deux amours
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2006-10-07
You have many deep and beautiful wordings here. The second verse is absolutely the favourite!
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| All roses have their thorns
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2006-10-07
I think your rhymes is kind of cheap in this poem. But hey, simplicity is great too..
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| Lunar Enchantment
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2006-10-07
Bringing memories from my walks at night, out in the snow.. It's great, thank you.
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| English is the main language in Sweden
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2006-08-21
And norwegian brunost.
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| Astral travel
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2006-08-21
Good to se how astral travelling is familiar to someone. Many advantages to search and find from within.
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| Crimson Bond
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2006-08-19
Vampires and all that jazz.. I can see why it's fascinating. You describe it very well here;
"Inhale deeply of me
Let me drink from you
Let me taste..centuries
Of knowledge"
Good.
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| rate 5
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2006-08-17
Uten f ordet får man ikke alltid sagt det.
Imponerende lekenhet med ord og oppsett. Enkelt - og lett.
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| Cage
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2006-08-13
Dying is easy, survival is hard. Cages of flesh and bones are what we are given, but spirit is for those who seek truth. Experience, don't swallow certainties.
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| I Love You In Your Bikini by M.A.Meddings
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2006-06-04
Very sweet. Very romantic heroic :p
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| Grounds for divorce by M.A.Meddings
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2006-06-04
Well, you know how to write passion. I can't say anything that's not already been said, so I'll just rate the poem and read it again.
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| Stupidity - your name is woman
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2006-05-30
Sigh. I am, in fact, a woman :)
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| Metallic
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2006-05-30
Slightly surrealistic. I like the copper crows, and the main thread of contrasts between nature and obsolete (?) metals.
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| Fuck you for doing that..
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2006-05-30
I can't see how swearing can portray the most intense feeling of anger or despair.
I would advise you to describe the feeling in other words,so the reader maybe gets the same.
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| Emerging from Hibernation
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2006-05-30
"Take me into their grip and
Don't leave me at all
Till I am compelled to
put them down with my broken quill,
on yellowing parchment-
figments of my imagination in black ink-
And they call it poetry..."
- what an apt choice of words!
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| An Awesome love by M.A.Meddings
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2006-05-30
AW, how sweet. It's not often I read poems where exclamation marks treats the poem well. But I really enjoyed the excitement it gave here. Electric.
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| Stupidity - your name is woman
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2006-05-30
Feminism isn't my kind of treat, neither is male chauvinism. Thanks for commenting and rating my poem Zoia.
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| Mustard Fields of Kashmir
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2006-05-30
Oh, and, if 5 is a "must read text" - this is one of them.
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| Mustard Fields of Kashmir
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2006-05-30
With the explanation of the symbolism of the mustard fields, I must say; touching. Your descriptions in this poem, promotes the injustice to all beauty.
Good reading.
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| Stupidity - your name is woman
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2006-05-30
Haha, well, I've been bitten before you see ;) Thanks for the comment.
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