This is a serious attempt to create the physical passion of love making in the line structure and the words. It is trying to describe the small nuances of close contact that turns love making into beauty.

Not for the faint of heart . It is a repost .



An Awesome love by M.A.Meddings

I love to hear
The way
You catch your
Bre---ath!!!
The moment
That I enter
You.
And feel the
Stinging pain of your
Finger nails across
The muscles of my back

Then
I watch the flickering
Light within
Your eyes as we
Unite
Our rhythmic surging
Touching; dancing
Moving!
Yielding!
A perfect compliment
To joy

Then I watch,
The awesome
Way
The freckles on your
Nose
Brighten
Then wrinkle as
The sinews of your face
Tighten, then relax
A quivering
Twitching need of me

And how delightful
Is the way
Our lips
Just!
Lightly!!
Brush !
Then tongue tipped
We taste
The burgeoning
Nectar
Of our love

I love to watch
In wonder
How
On the base of
Your throat
A tiny throbbing pulse
Quickens
With every stroke,
And invites my tender
Ki---ss!!
As I drown in the smell of you

I love the gentle way
We softly
Perspire
As our love becomes
An all consuming
Fire!
I love the way it is
I love Just! What
We do!
I love you!!
I love you!!!
I !! Love!!! Yo---u!!!!









Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-05-25 at 09:46

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theo
AW, how sweet. It's not often I read poems where exclamation marks treats the poem well. But I really enjoyed the excitement it gave here. Electric.
2006-05-30


Dan Cederholm
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Oppssss I am the only guy here hehehe

well this gonna be a bokmark an all regards

to you Mike for this beautiful passionated

erotik love poem!!!

Regards Dan


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2006-05-25


Julie Shehata
If this poem fails to leave you breathless, flushed and in awe then you've either never known the all-consuming beauty of true love making, or you don't have a pulse.
2006-05-25


Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
This is worth reading over and over! It still leaves me breathless!!!!! :) kathy
2006-05-25



It has been in my absolute favourites ever since you posted it last time!
In my opinion, this is
The Erotic Poem
and everyone should read it!
2006-05-25


Malin Johansson
This one is so beautiful, I got tears in my eyes... love can do alot to us all... and well you describe that very good in this one, about passion of love making...
2006-05-25