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One Can Visit, but One Never Can Stay

2022-12-04
Buddha nature comes and goes
but what if the nature of Buddha
was to come and go?


Ramblings 625 (with translation)

2022-12-04
parfois, ces petits textes me donnent l'impression que c'est une conversation que tu as avec toi-même...n'y vois aucune malice de ma part


FINGS WE SIT ON

2022-12-03
I am the mafioso
you are funny
you should play in my theater


WHEN YOUR LAUGHING AT OTHERS

2022-11-30
yes it is well known
there is a profound smirk haunting me


Look What I Bought for Your Birthday

2022-11-30
I must say, and on the sidewalks,
I see scowls, not signs of good will
Toward all men
me as well and I mimic this facial
attitudes!


WAKING IN A CLOUD OF DREAMS

2022-11-28
you have kept your mind young and open


After the Guests Have Gone

2022-11-27
writers live without end in a duality
they see themselves writing, they feel feeling, they suspect that they are falling asleep...


Stuff

2022-11-27
if you don't wanna all that stuff
just puff!


LIFE'S A WRINKLE

2022-11-26
I like it


ice fishing, anyone?

2022-11-26
the context of your writing is far from mine, I lack of references to be able to understand subtleties like "instead of being in
this south going
unshaven double chin"
and I don't know where I could get them


Eternal Damnation

2022-11-23
in America, there is the culture of fear, maybe because of the gun law?


HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ME

2022-11-21
in French, one says: "On n'est jamais mieux servi que par soi-même" that means "you are never better served than by yourself"
happy birthday


My mornings

2022-11-20
it's a flush of emotions, I love to hear the birds chirping


What else can you forecast?

2022-11-19
I read it like an introduction for something else, enjoyable!


An Afternoon in Vienna

2022-11-16
such churches should be in Africa!


Phyllis Wheatley

2022-11-14
it has been very tough for Africans-Americans indeed


A Dorky Improvisation

2022-11-12
I can picture the scene
very movie like


The comfort

2022-11-11
it is a true declaration of love
strangers may fall in love with your words
but then words are like "fetiches"


No Analysis Required

2022-11-09
you seem disappointed!
that we define ourselves by the color of the skin can be so superficial indeed


ain't

2022-11-05
I like your modesty that doesn't prevail yourself from writing very good prose or poetry!


Ramblings 623

2022-11-03
intéressant, les murs nous protègent de toutes agressions...qu'on soit dedans (château) ou dehors (des criminels)


Five

2022-10-31
we published quite at the same moment a poem about time ( see the poem: the present)


MY BALL AND CHAIN

2022-10-30
love is never ending, you find a spring
very good!


Hurry Sundown (Cribbed Title)

2022-10-29
you seem very lucid, even cold, is it you or the job that requested to be just like that?


Ramblings 622

2022-10-29
je pense à haute voix: l'écriture est un passe-temps où j'idéalise mes actes, mes pensées parce que la réalité est trop complexe pour la transmettre en mots. c'est ce que j'ai ressenti en lisant ton texte, spécialement ceci:but not completely these days...(2è ligne) pour moi, nous vivons dans un état d'incomplétude permanent...bien sûr, il y a autre chose dans ton poème qui me fait peur, cette extrême solitude de 12 ans et tu en es sortie sans Dieu, chapeau!


Ramblings 621 (with translation)

2022-10-29
ce qui est bien pour moi, c'est que je comprends ton anglais peut-être à cause de la proximité avec le français, les tournures de phrases sont plus proches du français

ton écrit est énigmatique mais cela te cause du tort ok? c'est difficile d'aller plus profond que
j'y pense, j'y pense
mais y'a rien à faire
y'a rien

pourtant y'a une pensée qui se mélange à une émotion désagréable si je ne me trompe


Ramblings 621 (with translation)

2022-10-28
même si c'est vide
là où il n'y a rien
comme le rien ne prend pas de place
il est possible
qu'il y ait quelque chose


WORRYING TIMES

2022-10-27
for the gain of some: The big brands!


Money the perfect deceiver of values.

2022-10-27
if people are different, there will be a judgement...(hierarchy)
if they are the same, there will be competition for places and food


Hush

2022-10-27
man, write instead!


A Change of Scenery Might Do Me Good

2022-10-21
I like your poetry you are a good poetry friend
I would like that you stay but the decision is yours


ZOMBIE ZARA

2022-10-19
there are here taste for fictional text and bemusement for the little ones


As Always, Winter is Russia's Ally

2022-10-18
indeed, and all the Russian alcohols are good heater


You are a feeling

2022-10-18
I think that you were much younger than in other poem like happy hours, you feel still like being in such adoration but I like this because it seems to have no frontiers between what you think and what you say or write, this is spontaneous!


Happy Hours

2022-10-18
and again, one makes one


Licenced to Keel

2022-10-18
hi dear poet ,what is keel?


You

2022-10-14
sometimes a mother's love is not what should be expected
but I feel a wound here needs to be healed if it is possible
I try not to judge my parents because they did what they could, really even if I don't have children I can make up my mind that this is the task of your life and a very difficult task indeed


GHOUL-LASH STEW

2022-10-14
very funny, must be filled with vitamins


A Lot to Process

2022-10-08
tu veux dire que les souvenirs remontent à la surface? les choses ont-elles vraiment changé au fond? le monde continue à tourner même sans nous! à bientôt!


behind each poem

2022-10-03
indeed, there is a human being
maybe shy who can't find another way
to tell what lays in the bottom of his heart


Bizarre Exchange

2022-09-24
I have no explanations neither, no meaning to give...but I've been that way many times as well...you understand all the words but the phrase doesn't make sense, doesn't ring a bell...


to be seen

2022-09-23
very abstract and ethereal
and perhaps mystical as well


gems inside

2022-09-21
yes it's true
words are like fresh material


Time - the healer

2022-09-20
I believe but I don't know too much in what.


DO I HAVE A REDEEMER, GOD KNOWS.

2022-09-19
thanks God, you are an atheist!


Rambings 617

2022-09-12
insaisissable, peut-être cela montre une certaine pudeur de ne pas savoir de qui tu parles mais on veut en savoir plus en tout cas moi


SWEET SORROW

2022-09-11
hi Griffoner, could you tell me in which country do you live?


04.IX.2022

2022-09-06
i like it


The Devil's in the detail

2022-09-03
I like it when the devil's part of the story, it reminds me the fear that goes by religions


AUTUMN DAYS OF MY LIFE

2022-09-03
good one!