| the next day
|
|
2023-10-08
click, clack; clickitty, clack
good rhythm
|
| THE STRANGELING
|
|
2023-10-06
I love your humor tongue-in-cheek
it will bring you to the verge of new constellations
|
| Our Beloved Lilliput
|
|
2023-10-05
I love animals
their life is tough
even those which decide
to live amongst humans
they endure their cruelty
|
| Oktoberfest
|
|
2023-10-05
to be honest
for me the bond between the title and the poem is not clear but it gives open spaces to think about
welcome back
|
| I Am
|
|
2023-10-04
my body is mosaic
I like this sentence
and also this one:
eyes vignettes
and I can get this
very well:
intrusive thoughts
a little bit like advertising
on a road
|
| Thunder
|
|
2023-09-24
nights after days, we wake up
in the same world, it looks like
death is a long sleep or an awakening
in the true world
|
| Human noise
|
|
2023-09-24
is the brain full of noises,
could we hear the silence then ?
we kill species just to plant food for animals
we feed others to eat them
we never apologize
|
| from here where do i go?
|
|
2023-09-24
yes, we live in many empty spaces, only our voices sometimes fill in
|
| Unknown truths
|
|
2023-09-05
exactly, math is a talent, some have more skills in that area than others, I noticed that when one of my schoolmates scored very well on an international level in math, he did his PhD in Princeton. It would have been better perhaps to develop my own skills instead...
|
| time passes and chances avail
|
|
2023-08-26
I guess time drags you into the future
only memories might weigh you much into the past
|
| love & drugs
|
|
2023-08-26
yes both love and drugs can be strongly interrelated, intertwined but it has indeed nothing in common imo
love is a bond that is supposed to make you free
and drug is for sure an enslavement
|
| Being different
|
|
2023-08-25
I know YOU do the best you can, don't need to justify yourself, I am with you
|
| Rapsodious Day
|
|
2023-08-19
you made me think of the earth as an ovocyte fertilized by the rain
|
| Perfection
|
|
2023-08-12
For me , you’ve illustrated and defined quite well the word entelecheia (entelechy) introduced by Aristotle
|
| My father
|
|
2023-08-04
it's good to pay tribute to his father
it's a curse to judge his parents
|
| Our Beloved Lilliput
|
|
2023-07-25
it has been a good friend
I can figure out
|
| weedkillers
|
|
2023-07-15
I like it
it has a tenderness I am sensitive to
|
| LIFE ITSELF
|
|
2023-07-15
really, I am not sure of that
|
| GANDERS WHILE DRAKES - DRAKES WHILE GANDERS
|
|
2023-06-27
you meant genders and drag (queen?)
|
| THE CURRIERS
|
|
2023-06-25
never lose your humor
|
| Families
|
|
2023-06-13
we always wish what we don't have
families are people with whom you don't have sex
except one of them lol
|
| WHAT IFS
|
|
2023-06-11
to kill the hatred
one has to terminate
to terminate the livings
we are part of the final solution
|
| Silent Self
|
|
2023-05-18
I like your idea that vowels are lighter than consonants like buoys
|
| Quick Coucou
|
|
2023-05-06
I cross my fingers
|
| lift
|
|
2023-05-04
my worth is in you and in me
everything below the skin is worth
beyond is price
|
| Missing You
|
|
2023-05-04
we pay our life not with money
but with beats of heart
thank you for posting this
|
| Poet bay
|
|
2023-05-04
new poets bring a fresh wind
otherwise it's stale
|
| 80 and april
|
|
2023-04-10
you were thinking of writing a poem?
|
| Bonjour M. Pelletier,
|
|
2023-04-08
tu as essayé chatgpt?
|
| Surprise
|
|
2023-04-08
I like the precision: 6.62% !
good
|
| flight delayed
|
|
2023-03-30
it's quite cryptic for me
|
| My anxiety
|
|
2023-03-30
I like it
|
| chiseled out
|
|
2023-03-29
very good
think with the heart!
|
| The Disillusionist
|
|
2023-03-28
can you escape your mind
fueled with the desires
both from in and out
even if it's a time bomb ?
|
| FREE BUT YET NOT FREE
|
|
2023-03-27
the thing is freedom is a state not an act...what would you do without a shelter, food and water?
nomadism is freedom but for the rich
the nomadism is the way the rich live on this planet!
|
| purple martin calling
|
|
2023-03-27
I like it
|
| Brush Strokes
|
|
2023-03-26
watching the painting, I can figure out why, there is a fluidity and a play of shadows that give its volume I guess...
|
| JUST A QUICKIE
|
|
2023-03-24
hell is 2 steps from heaven
|
| Inklings
|
|
2023-03-16
like the sun,
death cannot be
looked at directly.
I read the opposite
as a matter of fact,
we stay on the surface
|
| GARY LINEKER - THE FOX ON THE BOX
|
|
2023-03-14
the marks of today's exclusion from developed countries are that the banning are done by top ex-foreigners!
|
| Israeli Woman
|
|
2023-03-11
I didn't expect this poem when I read the title
well done
|
| PHONE FAULT
|
|
2023-03-10
I didn't notice because of the barrier of the language
but your humor is tongue-in-cheek?
|
| C'est pour cette raison (It's for That Reason)
|
|
2023-03-07
ça va aller Fiinemoods
cristallise pas trop ta souffrance
sinon, écoute une bonne musique
ça fluidifie le tout lol
|
| Japan
|
|
2023-03-01
I can of beer too
|
| Name
|
|
2023-02-26
I don't know why everybody on this site say that it's a marvelous poem...but ok, I don't like Beyonce too and she is mainstream
|
| Bobby 2013 - 2023
|
|
2023-02-18
I have a dog too and I fear that moment
|
| MY OTHER HALF
|
|
2023-02-15
and all upside down
|
| As of old
|
|
2023-02-15
"but just preserved our flame in delicate obscurity"
I like that, it shows well the intimacy of love
Our moment is not here and now
but is perennial in all time but now,
as if no temporary moment ever mattered
but eternity was always present.
I think it gives a good idea about eternity
"every time except now"
in the future, I shall read your work more carefully
|
| A Lover’s “Six”
|
|
2023-02-14
my father was reserve officer in the artillery
|
| ANOTHER BRANCH
|
|
2023-02-05
try to stay positive ok?
nice Sunday
Albert
|
