For you

I tried to find poetic terms
Which might relate to you

Like Diesel in a Petrol tank
Or a badly spelled tattoo

Like a wasp in the cornflakes
Or a nail in a tyre
Like a pigeon in a water tank
Or a tone deaf choir

Like a ring around the bath
Or gravel in a sock
Like a lift thats out of order
In a multi-storey block

Like an unexpected visitor
On a peaceful Christmas day
Or a pointless poison poem
With a line that does not rhyme...............or scan.



Poetry by Yanto
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Written on 2016-05-08 at 04:24

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Fantastic. Your list and rhymes are excellent sir :)
2016-05-14



A pleasantly waspish write, with a feast of amusing images. We like the solid rhymes – and the twist at the end!
2016-05-09



...sigh ... such romance! ... really ... you shouldn't have ...
Beautiful rhyming and great wording! :-999 LOL
Ashe
2016-05-08


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Brilliant!
2016-05-08


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
( ; - ) )
2016-05-08