the very act of taking a first kiss is such a traumatic thing when you are in love. A repost from last November

First Kiss by M.A.Meddings

First Kiss

Eyes so close they mesmerize
Lips so near they tantalize
Wishing you could
She hoping you would
Softly panting her breath
Touches your face
And you become her captive

Your mind in a whirl
How questions unfurl
'What would you do?
If I tried to kiss you'
'Then why don't you see'?
Her trying to be
Your enchanting gaoler

Closer her face
Satin and lace
Gentle perfume
Romantic the moon
Her lips just uplifted
Then just close your eyes
And hope

Flutter two hearts
Just smidgens apart
Drawing your needs
And the world wont take heed
My god will she mind
No way to know now
You kiss her

Hearing her sighs
As she closes her eyes
Lips lightly touch the passion is such
That she melts in your arms
A victim to charms
Then you both enjoy
The glory of your first kiss

Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-05-31 at 09:37

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Amanda Manmohan
This poem brought tears to my eyes, partly because of the memories it stirs in me. It was perfect and absolutely beautiful. You described what this feels like better than anyone else could. Bookmarked :)

Onyeka Nwelue
Always...always....always...I mean always beautiful and long as the name is....

I have fallen in love with your

Shas Ramlogan
I agree, it is really beautiful. Passionate yet innocent, beautifully romanticised imagery. Great piece.

the poem is really beautiful :) it captures the moment of a first kiss to a tee...i love it

Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
Oh this describes the confusion and desire that fight a battle just before the first touching of eager lips. Such romance in your words, I always look forward to reading your, because I know I will be affected most deeply. good one. Kathy

Malin Johansson
This kiss is beautiful.

In this poem of your words about love and romance... Great written.
Rgds your daughter

Dan Cederholm

Mike this is so beautiful . . .

breathe taking and powerful

Sincerly Dan!!!


"Eyes so close they mesmerize
Lips so near they tantalize"

..well done my friend!!!

this is good why don't you visit mine (It was my first kiss) and see how it links:_)

A poem about the First Kiss! ;) This is so very hero!!