on a gloomy afternoon in Kathmandu


grey vest fluttering
murky marshmallows floating
ash drops from my joint

Haiku by Karan Ram Sharma
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Written on 2020-04-29 at 09:55

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In those three descriptive lines, I'm feeling the gloom.

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Quite picturesque and dynamic with all the fluttering, floating, and dropping movements. It captures a moment in time, which is what a good haiku should do. Bravo!