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NOTE:  2020 05 28  12H11 EST  Come Off It Already - ramblings...




Come Off It Already

 

Head space self-beatings.

Oh, you silly mind!

There you go again.

We're meant to be allies,

Not to-the-death foes!

 

So quit your nonsense,

This is getting old and tired!

You do it all on your own,

That's what's going on.

For a brain - simply pitiful!

 





Words by F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2020-05-28 at 18:12

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shells
Love this, especially the opening and closing lines, I'm smiling at my minds recognition.
2020-05-30


Bibek The PoetBay support member heart!
The classic head vs. heart dichotomy! I love the cheery and playful nature of the poem.
2020-05-30


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Nicely done. Minds, you can't live with them, can't live without them.
2020-05-28



You had me at the first line. Good poem!
2020-05-28