A descriptive piece of my 64 280lbs friend,Gachinga's photo, in a rocky valley surrounded by mountains.


His Frame

A rocky terrain, with pockets of stubborn ferns protruding from their depths. A man stands, arms akimbo. From a distance, his large frame is swallowed by the expanse of the landscape.

The sunshine showers the land from a once overcast sky, the clouds still intent but undecided. His soul speaks its peace in the quietude of the view, the distant mountains, lush with greenery, offer him company like a keen audience at a recital.

Time holds still,each gaze is measured and deliberate yet carefree. His travels have allowed him a festival of sceneries and he drenches himself in this one too, like a familiar chapter in a tattered book.


In'kwa 2020.




Poetry by in'kwa
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Written on 2020-07-11 at 00:14

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in'kwa
Thanks guys.

I am only just coming round to read your beautiful and encouraging comments.

I will purpose to right and publish more often.

Lotsa luv to everyone!
2021-07-10


Christopher Fernie The PoetBay support member heart!
Dear in'kwa,

I very much enjoyed reading this poetic 'photograph' of your friend. You evoked the spirit of a beautiful friendship in a beautiful country, a most fitting image from the cradle of humankind.

With very best wishes,

Chris Fernie
2020-08-28


Editorial Team The PoetBay support member heart!
Congratulations! Your poem has been chosen to be featured on our home page by a fellow member of PoetBay. Thank you for posting on our poetry website!
2020-08-03


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Very nice!
2020-07-13


shells
You manage perfectly to portray the images of both your friend and the landscape in equal measures. Love the word quietude.
2020-07-13


Bibek The PoetBay support member heart!
Vivid and picturesque. Well-writ.
2020-07-12



Beautifully written.
2020-07-11


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
i love this image you've created of your friend. perfect.
2020-07-11


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
A very good work, great use of words well expressed good wordsmithing.
Ken D
2020-07-11