A short rhyme to back at the Pocket Planet Mercury


Big shade from Jupiter ( A fun response to Pocket Planet )

Iíll blot you out
Iíll toss big shade
Youíd better stay in pocket
Cuz Mercury a pebble be
Beside the Outcast Planet

You shout it out
But on deaf ears
Your rhymes have nada frequency
Cuz Mercury a pebble be
Beside the Outcast Planet




Poetry by Hans Bump The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2021-05-03 at 01:56

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Coo & Co The PoetBay support member heart!
Hoo, hoo, hoo! Very good, Hans; some ace rhymes and rhythms here :>)
2021-05-03


Bibek The PoetBay support member heart!
An equally fun response to Coo & Co's poem. Loved reading both! :)
2021-05-03


Thomas D The PoetBay support member heart!
Oh, wow, Mr B, this is turning out to be quite the poetic flyting! I'm so grateful you proposed this challenge.
2021-05-03