catches the breeze
bears the sun's weight
sips the first drops
feels the first frost
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Delicately simple, truthful, I'm blown away!
"Uppermost" was the perfect choice. Love this.
Maybe you should write about the lowest leaf also.
Nicely thought out. Here's to the eldest of every family.
Pros and cons of being first!