a good thing this is just something I made up :)


I'm dead ..

"Look at me.
I mean it.
Turn your head around
And look at me.
Look me in the eyes.
I gotta tell you something."

It's me.
Talking in my sleep.
Dreaming that I was going to tell you what I feel about you.
Gonna tell you I love you.
You said before you love me too.
Now it's gonna be just us.
us two.
Only me and you!

"What?!" You turned around angry and said.
Made me lose the lust of telling you.
"Yeah?" you said again.
"Oh.. " I said.
Pretending that my brain had taking the way.
"Soo..?" you said.
More and more angry in your voice.
"I'm gonna tell you what I fell" I said.
"About what.. ? " You said kind of unintresed.
"About you" I said and tried to smile.
"Oh .. " you said.
"Well .. I love you " I said and smiled.
You looked sad.
"What is it?
Shouldn't you be happy?" I said dissepointed.
"Yeah.. I though that too" you said..
"Well..?"
"I just don't love you any more.. " you said so carefully,
and then you walked away.

I didn't see you any more after that day.
But I do know you tried to reach me.

I went home crying.
Laying on the bed.
Didn't talk to any body.
Didn't wanna try to move on.

I went over to my father's closet.
Found something I shouldn't have found.
A gun.
I hold it, look at it, load it, use it.

"Look at me.
I mean it.
Turn your head around
And look at me.
Look me in the eyes.
I gotta tell you something."

"I'm dead.. "



Poetry by kittipuusen
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Written on 2006-06-18 at 23:25

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raven
your poem rocked . and your english is pretty good so keep up the good work
2006-06-23


Love Knight
Inspiringly touching. Love brings everything. The good the bad. But love also has its benefits. Let the right one revive you. write back. you seem like a good person to add as a friend.
2006-06-18