I know I'll probably go to hell for writing this.




ALMOST NAILED IT, BUT SCREWED UP?

My mind has a symbiotic relationship with my brain.

There's no other way for me to explain,

To the rest of my body it comes as a strain,

My body's packed with microbes and germs.

 

All mankind is build the same,

We got the muscles. 

The women got the brain's,

So why can't we all live together.

 

Make love not war echoes

In my brain,

Could someone please explain;

Why does man excel in war!

When in all else we failed.

 

Is it because.

Before Jesus was put upon the cross,

He was heard to say come what may.

I cannot wait to get nailed today,

It was pontius that took it the wrong way.

 





Poetry by Alan J Ripley The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2022-08-04 at 12:38

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Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
Where did you get the muse for this I wonder? :)
Nicely done.
Allen
2022-08-07


Sameen
I like the title as is. I think you've stumbled onto what you need.
2022-08-05


urban duck The PoetBay support member heart!
such a dichotomy here between male and female
let's see the other way
male and female gender are disseminated on a continuum from 100% pure male to 100% pure female, the identity is rather fluid but we failed by the outgrowing descriptions of what a male or a female is, we do the same as we did with race (pure white to pure black) the ideology that hides behind is to create communities based on gender and sex attractions, as some may have noticed that the reason to go on war for gender reasons are still (!)inexistant

this is just my opinion and view on things
2022-08-05


1LFD
Almost Nailed it, but screwed up?
2022-08-05