A description of depression

Dark Skies and Acid Rain by M.A.Meddings

No Summer sun
Neither green leaves
Darkening skies
Heavy clouds
And this incessant acid Rain

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Written on 2006-06-27 at 11:14

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
hey salut... this is concise and drives the reality upfront... a desolate, barren, void and dark feeling comes from this very strongly... depression, no matter the sun shining and the birds singing, it takes over and clouds over sight and senses in a very numbing way that overpowers... you described this very well... hope you're feeling alright :f thanks for sharing this...

later... xx

Kathy Lockhart
you have captured the gloom and destruction of what depression can and does do to the one who is in it clutches. well done. xx kathy

A perpect poem I like the way you throw it out! so much perpect!kissess

Malin Johansson
Yeah thoose clouds and that rain isn't fun at all... and most of all watch out for the dark skies thoose hurt the most...
A very good poem here!!!
it's bookmarked!!

Dan Cederholm

A very good poem about

the things whos happen

to the nature and ourself

when we try to live an rich

life in comfort with cars and

fast food, and the industry

is going full way forward!!!

A Really migthy poem Mike

Sincerly Dan