Its as if the touch has its own language- the letters, the alphabets, the vocabulary. Its a different world and i love it there with you.


Love's touch

i am so glad
i found you
and have you
in ways
i am not willing to fathom
or go to those depths
or may be i have been there
and am now safely ashore
just lying on a sunny beach
wearing my shades,
and your books as cover.

So
i am glad
i have you
in a touch and feel way.

The touch of your voice
when you are near
The touch of your eyes
from across a room
which i am still
shy to meet.

And i must tell you
i am beginning to understand
the language of your touch.

Need i say
lets do it more.

But it really doesn't matter
for i am seeped in you.



Poetry by Sona The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2023-10-19 at 18:23

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Sameen
A wonderfully romantic and sensual poem.

One thing part I really liked was:


So
i am glad
i have you
in a touch and feel way.

The simplicity of this stanza was really amazing and cut right to the heart of the matter.

Then when you expanded on it in the following:

The touch of your voice
when you are near
The touch of your eyes
from across a room
which i am still
shy to meet.

I fell to my knees it was so fitting. However, if I could give one small recognition, though you continued to talk about feel in:

And i must tell you
i am beginning to understand
the language of your touch.

I feel that if you'd started with "The feel of your" it would have brought a nice bit of repetition to the poem that I, personally, would have enjoyed and feel have elevated the poem. But its just my opinion.

The poem is great as is.
2023-10-22