Victory


A fire start
And in my heart
I tend to pretend
When many lives end

If just one drop
Let me shed it
If just one candle
Let me lit it

To be the only one who cries
When another person dies
Let my tears put out all the fires
and let it do what it requires.

To turn the fire into smoke
And not to soak,
the tears on my sleeve,
but to be the only one to achieve...

...victory




Poetry by Peter
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Written on 2006-06-29 at 14:19

Tags Victory  Tears  Fire 

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Me_Pia
this depth soo nice, I love it... what sort of victory is it?

*kisses*
2006-09-11


Zachary P. B.
Very good, the rhythm and rhyme, but your style and the emotions... excellent my friend.
2006-07-17


Veld Cooper
This is one of your best really deep poems, dear friend - I salute your talent and keep up the excellent work!
2006-07-11


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Hi there peter a very good and thought provoking text well done on content style and rythm regards Mike
2006-06-29