moon smile
Oh,what an expressing poem,i hardly hold my tears,your words pentrating my heart and mind,i rally feel its depth and you draw it well,but sharing such amazing poem takes me away from the darken loniness that i always have.good luck .hh ,xxxxxx.:):):):)
2008-04-04

C.G.Shankar
sorry. I forgot to rate the poem. this is to express my rating ......shankar
2006-08-26

C.G.Shankar
very nice and thought provoking poem indeed! Loneliness is a boon to think about togetherness. When alone, if we think the happy moments we spent while we are together or with people. Nobody is alone. if we feel alone at any tinme we have to blame for the lonliness.
love to others is the primary requirement and that guarantees the happy feeling of togetherness. thank you for sharing your views on 'lonliness' and provoked so many to nice discussion. pen on more of this kind. wish you fine day!
2006-08-26

single
Well written, splendid In my opinion.
I know this feeling (at least some of it).
2006-07-23

Amanda K
a SAd voice here. We all pass thru that and i feel that it's more like a draft or self-talk. thx 4 sharing it with us , Dear.

Love,
A,m,a,n,d,a K
2006-07-15

Tina
Oh dear, It's like I see myself through a window! I can really feel your loneliness in this dear Zoya and I know exactly how it is.. Remember dear, you are not alone;)

*Hugs*
2006-07-06

Bob
Hmmm, a diary, but where is the poem?
2006-07-05

Mirage
So Time itself, is your enemy? Allow me to doubt it (-:

Yes... who knows your real self?
That IS the question...

Goood writing! Makes my mind turn on.
2006-07-04

Dave Glavin
I know your anguished heart :)
Peace,Dave
2006-07-03

Peter
oh dear zoya, everybody feel alone sometimes, but that is why you have friends, call on us when you need us =) trust me you've got alot of friends, you shouldn't have to feel alone ;)

((huugs))
peter
2006-07-03

wee2souls
"alone" can sneek in..and feeling your the only one.. that feels emptiness..
we never really are alone in this world..!!
hugs to you.. Zoya :)
God gave you a gift to write and how you care for others!! how you are such a giving
soul..you are so loving as i see the way you express in your writing.. and we all get those days when we are so alone...
xoxoxox :)
2006-07-02

Lourdes
I recognize those days .
You paint it so well . I can almost see you from here . (..yes, that is me waving there ...see ?)
2006-07-02

Valentin Gabriel Cristea
Shiver of pain comes into your poem.Sweet love is in the air like a breath of wind that touches our hearts.I can feel the power of your poem.I can see butterflies searching for love.Deep feelings and good flow.I liked your poem.Good job!
2006-07-02

Valentin Gabriel Cristea
Shiver of pain comes into your poem.Sweet love is in the air like a breath of wind that touches our hearts.I can feel the power of your poem.I can see butterflies searching for love.Deep feelings and good flow.I liked your poem.Good job!
2006-07-02

Zoya Zaidi
Dear Arti,
Deep within is this desire,
To be loved and cared for...
Deep within is this yearning
For some to hold me in his arms...
Deep within is this craving
That someone might indulge me with his charm...
Deep within are desires,
Yearnings, craving and what not...
Who is come and put an end
To my woes and to my wants?
If wishes were only horses,
Won't I run away with them?
Thanks a pile for such a beautiful verse!
**hugs**
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-07-02

Cr4Ky
this is feelings!

a great write! you put the words right for so many people in this one..

it sad to be feeling this way.. i know..

but your choice of words..
the setting..

Superb!
2006-07-02

Halloway
I feel this is a very good text written by you, It talks to me.
Specially "choked by the demons of my past" and the thing about you're feeling lonely. I hopes you'll have a better day tomorrow, Soon, you're not lonely
2006-07-01

Teala
Ah, this speaks to me...very vivid my dear friend.
2006-07-01

Arti
Deep behind that radiant smile
Lies a poet's soul, weeping..
Deep within those beautiful eyes
Lie tears unshed for a long time...
Deep within that soft heart
Lies a sorrow untold, unheard..
But deep within your mind
Lies the knowledge that you have friends
Deeply in love and comradeship with you
Lie in our arms, and be yourself...

((big hugs))
Cheer up!
2006-07-01

Alexander
Zoya, you are not alone. I am always here with you.. Remember we talked about this? That we will always be here for each other:) I hope you are doing ok. Great poem:)

Alex:D
2006-07-01

salem
good done
thanx
2006-07-01

Zoya Zaidi
Thanks every one, it is only that:

When I am full of sorrow,
The world seems blue...

When I am down and out,
The clouds seem down too...

When I am down in the doldrums,
The world seems to be sinking with me too...

When black is my night,
The day seems as black as the night too...

Oh, When will the sun shine bright?
When my day will be bright too...

**Hugs to all of you**

I am feeling better already!

Love, xx, Zoya
2006-07-01

Kathy Lockhart
Zoya, your true expressions of yourself are always an awesome thing to read and discover. However, you today need love so i am seending all mine to you. I hope you feel it covering you, soothing you, cleansing you of your lonliness. I want so much to share it with you. Please bathe yourself in it. xxxxx kathy
2006-07-01

Alas, those days!...
2006-07-01

Mr.Mist
not so nice, one of those days..but it comes and its here...gotta do the best of it to get through...remember..you are never lonly..only in the mind maybe..but never in the heart...

Hugz and love

-mr.m
2006-07-01

lastromantichero
Zoya sweetheart

Please dont feel alone we all need you here even old romantics like me

We have been missing you and your lovely poems and we need your support

please stay a lovely text but has Zoya got the doldrums? then here is a nice hero kiss for you beautiful eyes rgds Mike xxx
2006-07-01

Zoya Zaidi
Awwwwwwwwww!
My dear Night Soul Woman what can I say?
You have put that much needed balm
to my wounds today...

I was wallowing in self-pity,
You came and made my day.
Swishing my sorrows away...

I will listen to the sound of silence
And hear that outcry,
That comes from a thousand hearts
Left in the cold out there...

I will sit and contemplate,
And introspect a little,
And make the best of the solitude,
That has been given to me
in this din of multitudes...

I will sit and count my blessing,
Which are not really few,
And then, I won't feel sorry for my self,
And thank my stars anew!
2006-07-01

night soul woman
Alone you will find a way
to defeat your demons
instead of feeding them

Alone you will find the
path that you need to follow
instead of wallowing in self-pity

Listen to the sounds of silence
they have so much to tell
Today will be tommorow
in few hours.

And tommorow is a new day
and who knows maybe someone
will look into your eyes and see
your soul, discover the beauty
behind those sad eyes...

(((hugs)))
your cyber-sister
2006-07-01