Haiku 1

Death is in the air
The soldier begins to weep
Wind blows away all



Poetry by Alan J Ripley The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2024-08-04 at 10:43

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D G Moody The PoetBay support member heart!
Good one Alan; but being a pedantic old fart I noticed and extra syllable on the last line.
2024-08-05