NOW THEIR'S ALONE

 

 

For they are the ripened juicy fruit

You and I nurtured in fertile soil.

Created in the tenderness my fingers

Felt inserting some isolating foam

Marking time on their arrival, dear.

The sweetness of your lusty kisses

Granted by those still blossoming lips

Planted them exactly, no near misses.

Fashioned their form unique forever

Metamorphosing enigmatic pips

Borne on fine candlewick clouds

And molding them into the pliant clay.

We tasted their most beautiful nectar

For but a brilliant yet shortish while,

Saw their starlight bursting out about

Leaving us bright trails of mystic memories

Before releasing their formative tether

Tearing their stalks from the homestead vine -

For they were ours, yours and mine,

And now they're theirs you know, their's alone.

 

 

© Griffonner 2025





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Written on 2025-05-17 at 10:40

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D G Moody
You have such a gift in the use of metaphors Allen, and here it all come together.
2025-05-25


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
A good metaphor, well presented.
2025-05-19


Albert Vynckier The PoetBay support member heart!
to be honest, I was ready to be lazy and put it on an IA to get a translated version of French but I didn''t and I did well, I thought I get the meaning well, I think the best meaning it's the first you get with yourself not a computer!

about the story, I doubt about the final morals on It, the conclusion, it doesn't look fair for the one who is writing this little piece
2025-05-17