it's deep true
Valentin Gabriel Cristea
Nice touch of feelings.I can feel the power of your poem.I liked your poem.Shiver of love comes into your poem.Good job!Nicely done.
it's no longer yours it's for the both of u. Alovely piece.
So romantic and beautiful..
how true , and so frightening correct that my goosebumps give my desire for loneliness away. I detest love.
I adored this haiku.
"Life - no longer yours"
But mine so much more...
wow pia this is such a lovely respons to the challenge can you put a note saying it is the third stanza to the challenge please rgds