Clear water

Diving,
into clear water.
The light
hurts my eyes,
the warmth
protects me
from myself.

I see your hand
in the water.
An open hand
waiting for me,
to grab it
to grab life
to grab fear
to embrace you.

The shore
can no longer be seen.
I float
weightless,
fearless,
into your arms.




Poetry by pia
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Written on 2006-07-17 at 13:47

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lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
wow you have rtnd with style well done babe rgds mike
2006-10-06


Will
Very calming images.
Very nicely done
2006-08-02


Zachary P. B.
Beautiful imagery here. It reminds me of when Jesus saved Peter from drowning because of his disbelief. There was always a hand to hold when you are alone. Loved it. Excellent.

Zachary
2006-07-22


Dan Cederholm
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Hey there a verry beautifuel poem

About love and clear water

Sincerely and with hughs/Dan



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2006-07-20


wee2souls
Beautiful poem here...
has such a peaceful calming within
oneself.... :)
cindy
2006-07-19


Arti
There is so much hope and a comfy, snuggy feeling around this poem.. Lovely.
2006-07-18


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hi there a lovely expressive text and very well crafted so clever the way you use the line form rgds mike
2006-07-17


nightman
I can swim easily into this poem, it is as clear as the water which has your emotions muddies so that you lose sight of knowing....Float on into love, drift high...N
2006-07-17