A Daily Occurrence

Morning sunlight strikes
The gold roof of the temple.
Beggars shield their eyes.





Haiku by Sameen The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2026-06-19 at 16:24

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arquious The PoetBay support member heart!
Love the double entendre of the blinding light.
2026-06-21


mickeko The PoetBay support member heart!
Love this! As it's a temple, your 8 syllable center is forgiven.
2026-06-20


Albert Vynckier The PoetBay support member heart!
I love the comparison/opposition with the eyelids and the golden roof, that made me think that the beggars could make up their eyelids with a golden color
2026-06-20


Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
Haiku it is. I'm sure the beggars will receive succor. Yes?
Blessings, Allen
2026-06-19


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
truth
2026-06-19