at the park

 

 

i lie upon my blanket

look up at the sky and trees

close my eyes—the colors vanish

 

open my eyes

am startled by the intensity

 

 

 





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Written on 2026-07-01 at 03:58

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Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
Isn't this a brilliant reminder of such events - One hopes everyone has had the opportunity to feel. I certainly remember such occasions, and your poem so simply describes - with such eloquence. It reminded me of a place that is extremely special to me that is now a thousand miles away that I might never see again. Thank you. Blessings, Allen
2026-07-01