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NOTE:  2006 07 19 23H13 EST  The Angel's Answer - writing exercise...




The Angel's Answer


Not every one of
The wings fluttering
In this space is
Absent of a light shade

Let me seize your eyes
The seconds are here
Open up your soul
Yes the travel was long

But not once have I left
Listen carefully, I breathe
The same rhythm I’ve
Always kissed on your heart

I’m holding you, love
Alone you are nevermore
The sun beams its glory
Let it lull you, cradle you

Where you’ve always belonged
Inside the depths of sweet life





Words by F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-07-20 at 05:26

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Individuality
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2007-03-01


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
*storm of applause* Wow what an exceptional piece of art!!!Wow girl! On my favourites for sure!*bookmarked*Why haven't I discover this piece of art sooner?*storm of applause*
Well written from a great poetess!!!
2006-09-20


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
This is an awesome piece of work. so many powerful words. "The same rhythm I've, Always kissed on your heart" Delivers so very much. There is a deep intense melancholy painted here. A very enjoyable read, a poem that is a joy to read and read again as each time it whispers something new.
2006-07-28


Dan Cederholm
Hey this is such a great Poem!!!

I specially love these lines!!!



"
I'm holding you, love
Alone you are nevermore
The sun beams its glory
Let it lull you, cradle you"


Sincerely with respect and hounors!!! Dan

And thanks again for the tipps on Evans

Blue!!! A great band!!!
2006-07-20



You are sooooooo greatttttttttt.........once again I love it..I love angels.....tc..kissess
2006-07-20


Arti
So beautiful. A wonderful reminder that a guardian angel is always on my shoulder. Love the last stanza and the couplet..
"I'm holding you, love
Alone you are nevermore
The sun beams its glory
Let it lull you, cradle you

Where you've always belonged
Inside the depths of sweet life"
((hugs))
Arti.
PS - there is no rating greater than 5, or this would get the highest there was.
2006-07-20


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
wow there its so nice to see you posting again and what a beautiful poem this is well done rgds mike
2006-07-20


Zachary P. B.
That was beautiful. The wording and imagery, so meticulously drawn out... A masterpiece. Bookmarked.
2006-07-20


BlueyedSoul
Absolutely beautiful!!!!
I LOVE EVERY WORD

but these lines are perfection:

I'm holding you, love
Alone you are nevermore
The sun beams its glory
Let it lull you, cradle you
Where you've always belonged
Inside the depths of sweet life

~BlueyedSoul
2006-07-20