Daybreaker
I liked this one as well! =)

A bit of truthful confession. We really need to allow ourselves to not always be the lion!

A strong confession in deed!
2006-07-31

An admirable confession-admission....
it could also be an anthem.... and a constant reminder of how much more able you are of reaching far more noble than any king of the jungle.... and moreso - a better chance of culling your baser and less impeccable instincts..... Just got to rate this one.
2006-07-30

Zoya Zaidi
Threre is a soulful, quiet and honest poignancy about this poem. I like it!
Welcome to the bay!
Sorry about being a little late there, but, I am on a holiday.
(((hugs)))
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-07-29

pia
I just love this poem ..no need for you to be a silly lion...so much better for you to be you...I really enjoyed this poem ! With love Pia
2006-07-24

you are not a just a boy but a very good boy...very nice poem here!!!!kissess
2006-07-24

Kathryn Walsh
But who is to say there is not a lion inside you? Very beautiful! I love it.
2006-07-23

Teala
Very deep, very emotional, brillant!
2006-07-23

Arti
Haha no you're not a lion... a lion couldn't have typed this out with his claws, the keys from the keyboard would have been ripped out of the keyboard... lol...
I'm just glad you have a lion's heart in a boy's soul.
2006-07-23

Malin Johansson
I think you are a mix of a lion and a boy :))
A good poem here Zachary
Regards from Sweden
2006-07-22