eehrrmmm.. help, ideas.. anyone?


curse the night

call my name in the dark
i`m sleeping
shut your eyes
in the night
i know

see the mountains rise high
in the moonlight
crash and fall
cause they know
you hurt

call my name in the dark
your running
see the fear
in your face
i know

after all of these nights
i wonder
is it me
that is
raving mad

curse the night
when the dreams
are eating
on the faith
of a tired soul

curse the nigth
when it`s all
gone wrong





Poetry by Cr4Ky
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Written on 2006-07-28 at 02:03

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What kind of help dude?
There are a couple of spelling typos.
But I like the feel of the poem....
2006-07-28