Paper Reminder

Old tree, milled and refined, now paper napkin

on which I wiped my stiff upper lip

of the last meal we ate together ;

saved, into the pages of a book you gave me.

Each ruck and wrinkle put there by wringing hands.

Heart heavily sedated by rational thinking in

deciding fate for that day, that hour;

those few moments when I had control over my own destiny.

Holding tears that fell to sun baked sidewalk

knowing what the outcome would have to be.

Captain of our own ships you say? I think not.

Had I been captain, my vessel would have

not washed ashore this island without you.

I would have not needed this paper reminder

of a Chinese lunch, a last few words and kiss

that would have to sustain me these long days at sea.

Quaint reminder of what was, saved into a book

and heart that remembers you.





Poetry by barbie
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Written on 2006-07-28 at 11:42

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Zachary P. B.
That was beautiful. =)

Love and paper are both great things. I enjoy the former more, I don't know about you. haha just kidding, bad joke.

Wonderful poem, I love the figurativeness and metaphor of it all.

Zachary
2006-07-30



A nice written piece of reminder!!!!kissess
2006-07-29


Kathy Lockhart
this is a beautiful writing! It was a pleasure to read. I will add you to my writing friends if you don't mind so i will know when you have posted something new.
2006-07-29



Where ordinary people only can see a used paper napkin, a piece of garbage, you could see emotions and weave these into beautiful heartfelt lines. A great read! Welcome to the bay, Barbie!
2006-07-28


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
Ah. ...Memories. ... bittersweet memories...
A very good poem here!*applause*
2006-07-28


kid
very nice poem
2006-07-28


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
well done barbie a lovley poem keep them coming rgds mike
2006-07-28