love's derivatives


The tags of love ;
Springs of an impression :
It's motley derivatives ;
The caress on a baby's fingers ;
A kiss on the daughter's cheek ;
A flutter of the heart ;
The amatory dimples ;
The relapse to mom's bosom ;
An ache untold :
A stranger and his sallow face .
The impassioned volition .
Jealousy the emotion ;
Torture of the self ;
A revenge upon oneself .
An object of hate
Nurtured with amor .
The raging flames
And the patterns forlorn .
Love in a fusion ;
Orb of infinity .
Flashes of ruination
And abrupt evolutions .
Dazzling vision ;
Bound tongue ;
Just a blur !
A passing torrent
Of unknown permutations :
The tags of love only .

Poetry by binesh
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Written on 2006-08-14 at 19:25

Tags Love  Blend  Emotion 

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I like this. There are many kinds of love.

I feel that plain commas might be less distracting for puncuation:)

I like the title, it's catchy, and I like this line: The caress on a baby's fingers; ~ beautiful.

liked the style of writin'. well done.