You slipped

I broke the biggest promise of them all
When I said I'd catch you while you'd fall
But you slipped out of my hands and onto the floor
When you walked out of the door
I couldn't hold you
All I did was loose a heart that was true
You were everything to me
I didn't want to let you free
Open my hands and let you go
For you I'd do anything to show
I love you please come back to me
I'll catch you I promise just wait you'll see




Poetry by Ariel Bennett
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Written on 2006-10-09 at 19:39

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Zoya Zaidi
I just love the opening lines... It is so beautiful... Very well expressed every word of it ... the last two lines have an appealing quality to them.
*Bookmarked*
(((hus))
Love, Zoya
2006-10-09