The Midget Angel On The Battlefield of Doom

The dreadful battlefield lay still and wan,
Wind whistling through the shell-torn trees;
And the deathly scene echoed to the groans
Of wounded, sobbing, bleeding, dying men.

But, as out of a magic dream, a vision appeared:
A midget Angel riding on a donkey's back
All neatly dressed in schoolgirl clothes
With a little halo hovering o'er her head;
She wandered, lovely as a dwarfish cloud,
Dismounting here and there to give comfort
And a bit of head to the maimed and crippled.

"Oy, I'm over here" a one-legged soldier bravely yelled,
Desperate for a final glorious blowjob;
Normally he wouldn't have given a fat ugly dwarf
A second look, but beggars can't be choosers.

Poetry by Edna Sweetlove
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Written on 2006-10-10 at 18:35

Tags Death  Love  Sex 

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English War Veteran aged 98
Midgets, blowjobs, donkeys, fat ugly dwarfs, Oops! I have written an Enda Sweetlove poem - and I was just going to comment on it not write one!!

Audrey Barber
Hey Edna
This is cool, can you send that angel my way too

Audrey Barber
Hey Edna
This is cool, can you send that angel my way too

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Well, I certainly took some form of enjoyment out of this...but honestly. Your name is quite misleading. Your comments...they are not so lovely at all. Perhaps before judging someone you should read their other works, and if they are still as illiterate as you make SUPERJEW66 (who happens to be a real-life friend of mine, and doesn't take this site as seriously as you), by all means, blast them. But in layman's terms: no one really cares what you have to say. Poetbay is for positive feedback. If you haven't got anything worthwhile to say, don't say anything at all.

you know..crazy..but
freedom of speech you do write so openly!! and this one made me laugh so so..have to be a wee nuts!!
a mixed nut we all are and you are mixed
for sure lol! a wee humor:)
a midget angel..a funny write.i thought..

You incorporate wordsworth? Which is a little rich for this text imo but it certainly has impact!lol Hmmmmm, not to sure what I think about your work!lol Tai bemused!!