I just felt like putting down these words for the challenge..
there are different ways to see the ultimate love.. i`m just trying to put down some of my first thoughts when i say ultimate love

Have fun, be good, and love to you all!!


Ultimate love (for the challenge)

Ultimate love
Is born
In the eyes
Of sweet
Little babies
Looking at
Their mother
And feeling
The warmest embrace
They'll ever feel

Ultimate love
Is in the air
We breathe
When the wars
Are over
And new flowers
Covers the fields
In a new spring
Of hope

Ultimate love
Is the first time
You see
Eyes that reflects
Your own
In a way
That stops
Your heart
The most thrilling
Second of a life




Poetry by Cr4Ky
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Written on 2006-10-11 at 00:12

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Rob Graber
Far-ranging; a good effort!
2006-10-11



You capture Ultimate love so well Cr4ky, especially the ultimate last verse love. A marvelous feeling indeed. Good to read your work, New here, Tai
2006-10-11


keith nunes
excellent notions of love dude. really excellent
2006-10-11