Lourdes darling, you always touch my soul, with your love, honesty, caring and sharing nature. May this year bring you happiness and fulfillment in life...

Lourdes- the talented the wise

You are talented you are wise
A virtual sage in disguise...
When you speak your talent speaks
When you cry, my sorrow peaks

Always a fountainhead of creation,
Your thought and feelings are elation
For the soul and heart indeed-
You belong to another creed.

There's something about you dear
Which to my heart is very near
Your soul is honest, your voice's clear
You sometimes talk like a seer.

You are always a joy to me
Your concern always touches me
Large of heart and full of cheer
You are my precious gem, my dear!

Happy Birthday and lots of Cheer!
May all your troubles end this year!

Author: Zoya Zaidi
Aligarh (UP), India
Copyright : Zoya Zaidi

Poetry by Zoya Zaidi
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Written on 2006-11-01 at 18:38

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munir mezyed
Like I told u before u really draw with words but what makes ur poems so special is the flow and the music of it.

Amanda K
so beautiful and musical .lucky Lourdes

Bhakta Raj Giri
Highly emotion and very good placement of diction.

Excellent tribute to a lovely person..BRAVO!

English War Veteran aged 98
OH WOW !!!!

Amazing !!!

oh , My beautiful beloved friend . I am at loss for words here !! ___
Your words pierce through every bone and tissue of my being like red fireballs . I cant believe you gone and done this ! I am in tears and I feel like the most blessed girl in the universe . Having a friend like you is a gift from above . a simple Thank you does not cover it , but it is all I have got . so humbly I Thank you for being in my life . and Thank you for this precious gift , my Aligarh angel . Thank you !!!!

All my love to the woman that lights up everywhere.

*Lourdes, the blessed .

Wow, such a beautiful birthday contribution!! :)

Happy Birthday Lourdes! :)


reading this poem is like visiting again an oasis i had wandered away from and lost--good to be reading your lines again after so long -- your sun still shines brilliantly -- trying to raise mine out of the wilderness -- i love the rhyming here

beautiful and captivating
just like the one it was written for


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hi there zoya a wonderful contribution to this ladys birthday well done rgds mike

Yes! So very well written Zoya!

Kathy Lockhart
Your talent is vast as is your loving heart.