A beautiful collaboration for this sonnet
thank you Brian



Distant Arms ~Co-write with Saga




slipped between darkness and time
we escape jagged lives in distant arms
our distance should not make this a crime
as deep inside we find warmth in lover's charms
marking moments with gentle whispered songs
dancing trace less in wondered sheltered bliss
I can stare upon your eyes ever long
showering your lips with a physical yet emotional kiss
and though held in raptured embrace
these thousand miles we are not apart
for in this caress they cannot trace
the miles, the distance, between one heart
and never touching, our intimacy wed
and ever longing for what lies ahead




Poetry by BlueyedSoul
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Written on 2006-11-02 at 09:15

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Saga
I always have fun doing a duet with you Blue!!!
2006-11-04


brian paglia
Very cool Blue!I can't help but noticing how your poetry gets better and better with each piece.Keep it up kiddo!
2006-11-02


Kathy Lockhart
this is a beauty! Wow the two of you dance beautifully together. I love your creations. Very romantic Blue!
2006-11-02


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
A beautiful love poem with this excellent poem well done you two warmly rgds mike
2006-11-02


keith nunes
lovely duo team. a senusous and touching piece. well done
2006-11-02