At night


Vision of Malmö

Water trickling.
Stars twinkling.
The concerns of the day.
The innocence of the night.
The city lies quiet.
Echoes of the people.
Fading away.
Lights from the windows.
Shadows from the alleys.


Blending into one...





Poetry by ForeignFragments
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Written on 2005-10-04 at 23:45

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Zoya Zaidi
Another superb piece.
WHERE ARE YOU NOW?
Come back!
Love,xxx, Zoya
2006-03-23


epohonci
(trying to see the night as innocent) well i'm not sure on that one... but i suppose it has its moments :) what's malmo?
2005-10-05


John Ashleigh
Oh I can deffinetly visualise the poem, only the last line throws me off. I'm nt sure how this poem 'blends' as such.

I find the last line doesn't fit. :( Maybe something like -- 'Grey turns to blackened swirls' -- atleast with a line like that you can tell the change. Good, though.
2005-10-04