Love poem


Pain

Sitting at home
How could you leave?
I'm all alone
Only to greive

Alone in the night
Tears down my face
Out of the light
Feel sorrow and hate

Of all the feelings
I've ever had
I couldn't imagine
Being more sad

You changed my life
You made me feel
Nothing of sadness
You made my heart heal

Now that your gone
The whole remains
Whenever the wind blows
I still feel the pain



Poetry by Tabitha Campbell
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Written on 2005-10-08 at 09:15

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liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
welcome to the Bay -
I love how you have written this.
Liz.
2006-03-06


UnforgivenAngel
'Whenever the wind blows
I still feel the pain'

thats unusual,its good.it kind of suggests tough that the pains not constant,that the pain comes and goes,very well thought about.this is definately bookmarked.
2006-03-04


Ray
Pain makes us stronger. I love this piece, brings up memories. Thanks.
2005-10-08


penfold18
This is a nice piece of work keep it up.
2005-10-08