i don't really know what it means yet. the bodensee is the german name for the lake of konstanz where my friends from germany are from; they left today. for them i guess; especially for stefi. and i think it's for sara too.


something just broke

"fuck; i'm cold."
"yeah, your hands are shaking."

as we lie here naked
in the lake of konstanz,

[perhaps just exposed
(in the bodensee)]

god (who is that?) --
i'm [(sh...)] so numb.

"i need a light."

[and with the nicotine,
everything else is illuminated]



Poetry by Zachary P. B.
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Written on 2006-11-18 at 05:30

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kladdpapper
this is very creative. I like it. No thoughts are spelled out, it's very open for personal interpretations.

I like:

god (who is that?) --
i'm [(sh...)] so numb.

"i need a light."

[and with the nicotine,
everything else is illuminated]

sara.
2006-11-20


Arti
Didn't you guys get blankets? Heck, you know its November!
2006-11-18