I'm not deleting my site but i'm not posting things for a while. I may come back I dont know.


Leaving the bay

I'm sorry my friends but I'm going away
I'm now leaving the bay
I may come back I don't know
I guess I don't have the "poetry flow"
I'm now going to say good-bye
I tried as hard as I could try
My anger build up inside
Now I'm hurt and that I cannot hide
I'm quitting my dreams
Of being something famous as hard as it seems
It just took one comment
All this hard time spent
Everyone I've met has been great like a family
Please always remember me
Bye everyone and take care
Remember if you need me I'll be there




Poetry by Ariel Bennett
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Written on 2006-11-29 at 05:16

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stevelee
Trust me. Byron Shelley and Keats all had their critics. You cannot reach the top without taking a few knocks, and it should make you a stronger person on your way to getting there. Think about it , see you soon . Regards Steve
2006-11-29


Coolaaron88
Ok Ariel, I respect your wishes, please come back soon.

~Aaron Rowe
2006-11-29