Just sobering up from a get-together!!!


Remember! Remember!


All day long, I toil,
To make the wrong things right,
To save the day,
For everyone,
And yet, I don't see you,
Through all of this,
All I can see,
Is your lovely face,
But I had to see my friends, first,

A drink or two,
Or two or more,
It never stops and never ends,
But the end of the road is short,
And like all things,
It's on the way,

Unlike a sip of coffee,
I should be in bed,
But I wanted to see your voice,
Before I sleep,
Before I sober up,

Will I remember, I'll decide,
I have that right, of course,

I still remember the smell,
Of beauty from such innocense,
After drinking forbidden fruit,
Dancing among the overwhelmed and happy,
The preying and the predators,
The stumble and fall,
I won't realize until,
The rising of the cold and judging sun,

Admittance is the first step,
So I guess I'm doing it now,
You can laugh later,
You can chuckle later,
And afterwards, maybe a snicker,
But remember this,
I still had moe fun than you did this night,
And got home without a ticket,
Thank God, Thank God, Thank God,

You see,
Even angels can falter,
Just a little,
To the daring, somber and foolish,
Please do not try this at home,

The dancer moves without a trace,





Poetry by Saga
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Written on 2006-12-09 at 08:05

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Amanda K
Saga,
Was a very good text. As usual you are special with your themes.

all the best,

Language: 5
Format: 4
Mood: 5
Overall: 4
2006-12-10


Kathy Lockhart
there is only one perfect being and we are not him.
There are so many times I have thanked God for protecting me from my own stupidity.
I thank him even when he lets me stumble and fall for then I learn even more.
You always make me think! xx
2006-12-09


weirdzarun
Wow. Somebody had some crazy fun. Good work on the poem, and on partying as well. Drink plenty of water.
2006-12-09


BlueyedSoul
the tarnished wings of an angel?...just brush them off babe...you will fly again to new heights
get some rest
hugss
blue
2006-12-09