It's tarring me apart

To see me break heart

Killing me deep inside

Seeing these tears he tries to hide

I try my hardest to leave

But without him I cannot achieve

Watching him crumble and fall to tears

Doing this to him is one of my fears

Maybe breaking my heart is better

I just don't want to be his hearts shredder

His tears blinds me in pain

It hurts so bad... no words have yet to explain

Poetry by Ariel Bennett
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Written on 2007-01-05 at 03:27

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betsy Firefly
Our hearts are often torn apart when we are young lovers. Even older lovers, but it sems to tear harder when you're young if I remember right.

I think that should be tearing, or maybe, 'It's torn me apart. would fit better Ariel, and maybe 'to see me break your heart'. A good poem on the choices that lovers have to make sometimes. Nicely written. Smiling at you, Tai