touching the escape





so I think of you
as I write messages
putting time on posters

my heart in a pocket filled with holes
roses blooming in gardens long time gone
as we are touching the escape
in minds we bend into desired shapes

our journey on a road in disguise
filled with yesterdays

so I look at you
as we head east
searching for time unseen





Poetry by kath
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Written on 2007-01-05 at 08:18

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Esti D-G
WoW!!!!

Luv esti
2007-01-13


Amanda K
a special piece to be honest. simple, meaningful and different.

all the best on 2007,
2007-01-07


betsy Firefly
What honesty! "...minds we bend into desired shapes.."

Let our New Year's prayer be that we drop this horrible behaviour and ask for help to bend our own mind into shape with the help of God!

Betsy
2007-01-06


Chris Fernie
This is a beautiful poem which leaves a ghostly memory.


Happy New Year, belated but heartfelt.

Chris
2007-01-05


Teala
Raw, deep, emotions..fantastic imagery, nice layout--bravo!
2007-01-05


Rob Graber
Simply beautiful.
PS: Line 7 wants "desired."
2007-01-05


Dejan
There is a rainbow in your words
that can be touched only by a soul.

Thank you, Kath.
2007-01-05


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Katherine these words are the epitome of this wonderful poem

my heart in a pocket filled with holes
roses blooming in gardens long time gone
as we are touching the escape
in minds we bend into desierd shapes

well done it is a love thats beautiful

rgds mike
2007-01-05